I agree. (I loved the father/mother revision in Draco's comment and was really touched by Sally Anne's indecision about what she wanted to say and what she could risk saying -- I think for her it was both that she felt constrained and that she feels ambivalent about her parents.)
I think the strikethrough is pretty important for this rpg because it shows the degree of self-censorship that's necessary. (Plus, as brimtoast says, it helps communicate information to the reader that would otherwise not be plausible for characters to reveal in this game's AU and its journal format.)
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Date: 2009-02-13 04:20 pm (UTC)I think the strikethrough is pretty important for this rpg because it shows the degree of self-censorship that's necessary. (Plus, as brimtoast says, it helps communicate information to the reader that would otherwise not be plausible for characters to reveal in this game's AU and its journal format.)